Inspired by a line from "Time of The Doctor". Enjoy
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People always find,
That there are days in which they won't know who they are,
So they will search for their identity, near and far.
Now. think about this idea, put it in your mind,
"What if you have been different people, all this time?"
In early life, you were a klutzy baby,
Later, you may have been a mischievous child,
Then perhaps a kid that would say," Pay attention to me!"
Maybe you were even a bit wild,
Then a brooding teen, and outgoing young adult,
A responsible grown-up, and then a kindly old man,
Who will comfort the kids, even if it's they're fault.
.
Because when you think about it,
In looks and demeanor, strength and brains,
Looking back on it, you have to admit,
These people were different, in all but name.
Now you may think that you are going insane,
But what if I asked you, "Maybe they are all the same?"
Maybe they were all you,
So that you could grow and change,
Because we are all different people in our lives, and that's okay,
As long as you remember them all,
as long as in your mind, they all stay,
We hope to always be confident, to always stand tall,
Hope that remember, you always may,
when they were you
And you were they.
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Yeah, I feel as though, in retrospect, this will need some editing in the future. Tell me what you guys think, and/or what I should change.
Okay, changed it around a bit. Now, what do you guys think?
***
People always find,
That there are days in which they won't know who they are,
So they will search for their identity, near and far.
Now. think about this idea, put it in your mind,
"What if you have been different people, all this time?"
In early life, you were a klutzy baby,
Later, you may have been a mischievous child,
Then perhaps a kid that would say," Pay attention to me!"
Maybe you were even a bit wild,
Then a brooding teen, and outgoing young adult,
A responsible grown-up, and then a kindly old man,
Who will comfort the kids, even if it's they're fault.
.
Because when you think about it,
In looks and demeanor, strength and brains,
Looking back on it, you have to admit,
These people were different, in all but name.
Now you may think that you are going insane,
But what if I asked you, "Maybe they are all the same?"
Maybe they were all you,
So that you could grow and change,
Because we are all different people in our lives, and that's okay,
As long as you remember them all,
as long as in your mind, they all stay,
We hope to always be confident, to always stand tall,
Hope that remember, you always may,
when they were you
And you were they.
***
Yeah, I feel as though, in retrospect, this will need some editing in the future. Tell me what you guys think, and/or what I should change.
Okay, changed it around a bit. Now, what do you guys think?
Two Thumbs up. I don't care if it was inspired by the doctor (though that makes it even cooler). its well made with a clear message. I like it.
ReplyDeleteDo you like the changes I made?
DeleteHmm. The message is still unchanged so I say it's good. That's my honest opinion.
DeleteThank you. My mom looked it over and said it feels more like a prose than a poem, so I changed it around a bit.
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